A few things. First, as it is currently the song is more a slow trance song than a house song. More on the serious side though, you have a great setup here which just screams potential. I would say if you were making short trance keep it, but if you want house what you have is a really nice and long buildup. Keep at it bro. Just my amateur opinions.
Awesome synths here. Just get a punchier kick and this would be killer! If you use FL studio you can add a para eq to your kick and lower the mids to get a punch effect. Also, lower the bass some. The pluck synth is still way too good. :D No idea why it has such a low rating.
I can see you have the same problem I usually do. No one actually reviews. Well, I guess I'll do that. First off, the vocals made the song. The only problem was that after the vocals the synths just sounded off. The opening minute was very chill and awesome, good buildup, but then that (drop I guess?) just sounded out of place. If you had used other smoother synths like you had been and done more of a drop and kept the beat going I think the flow would have been more consistent. As it is after the first minute it no longer qualifies as dubstep. The synth at 2:40 was pretty cool. Like this part. Still don't think the bass agrees with the rest of it though :/. 4:06 had a nice switch up. Ok ending, but a bit sudden. I think that covers everything. Sorry for leaving such a long review.
A slow beginning, but once it reaches that two minute mark...hands up for some great wubz!
I like the chillstep, but the crackling at the beginning of the song is a bit painful. Other than that, keep it up!
More kick needed
It was pretty cool to have all the pieces come together and battle, but I think your percussion could use some more oomph. We all love Patrick at his best though!
thanks for the feedback; i'll try and find a better kick sample
It's pretty cool, reminded me of greenday when I first heard it, except for all the screaming.
Although tis great, still needs more kick or snare behind the melody.
The slides aren't too bad and add an interesting touch! I just wish I could get as many people to comment on my songs as you do on yours!
Inspired by the little trolls perhaps? Anyway, yeah that 180 sure does KICK in!
the little trolls reminded me of the song, but it didn't inspire me per-se. But yes, I thought the HHC part was totally epic!
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