IS a happy whale, funny first submit. Great song choice.
A few things. First, as it is currently the song is more a slow trance song than a house song. More on the serious side though, you have a great setup here which just screams potential. I would say if you were making short trance keep it, but if you want house what you have is a really nice and long buildup. Keep at it bro. Just my amateur opinions.
Awesome synths here. Just get a punchier kick and this would be killer! If you use FL studio you can add a para eq to your kick and lower the mids to get a punch effect. Also, lower the bass some. The pluck synth is still way too good. :D No idea why it has such a low rating.
I can see you have the same problem I usually do. No one actually reviews. Well, I guess I'll do that. First off, the vocals made the song. The only problem was that after the vocals the synths just sounded off. The opening minute was very chill and awesome, good buildup, but then that (drop I guess?) just sounded out of place. If you had used other smoother synths like you had been and done more of a drop and kept the beat going I think the flow would have been more consistent. As it is after the first minute it no longer qualifies as dubstep. The synth at 2:40 was pretty cool. Like this part. Still don't think the bass agrees with the rest of it though :/. 4:06 had a nice switch up. Ok ending, but a bit sudden. I think that covers everything. Sorry for leaving such a long review.
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